TO: Brandon de la Cruz
RE: recital paper

Hey Brandon,
Well, you did an excellent job on this. It was a treat to have one in such good condition. Normally I'd have to send you back this copy, you'd make corrections, and then send me back both copies to correct, but you've done such a good job that I'm just going to list out the general things that need to be fixed. Please make those corrections and then you can just email me your paper and I'll double check quickly. And then you'll be done.

[Love,
Your Friendly Neighborhood Style Editor]

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